Essays

=College Essay Writing Tips =

Write an Effective Application Essay
A great application essay will present a vivid, personal, and compelling view of you to the admissions staff. It will round out the rest of your application and help you stand out from the other applicants. The essay is one of the only parts of your application over which you have complete control, so take the time to do a good job on it. Check out these tips before you begin.

Keep Your Focus Narrow and Personal
Your essay must prove a single point or thesis. The reader must be able to find your main idea and follow it from beginning to end. Try having someone read just your introduction to see what he thinks your essay is about. Essays that try to be too comprehensive end up sounding watered-down. Remember, it's not about telling the committee what you've done—they can pick that up from your list of activities—instead, it's about showing them who you are.

Prove It
Develop your main idea with vivid and specific facts, events, quotations, examples, and reasons. There's a big difference between simply stating a point of view and letting an idea unfold in the details:
 * **Okay:** "I like to be surrounded by people with a variety of backgrounds and interests"
 * **Better:** "During that night, I sang the theme song from Casablanca with a baseball coach who thinks he's Bogie, discussed Marxism with a little old lady, and heard more than I ever wanted to know about some woman's gall bladder operation."

Be Specific
Avoid clichéd, generic, and predictable writing by using vivid and specific details.
 * **Okay:** "I want to help people. I have gotten so much out of life through the love and guidance of my family, I feel that many individuals have not been as fortunate; therefore, I would like to expand the lives of others."
 * **Better:** "My Mom and Dad stood on plenty of sidelines 'til their shoes filled with water or their fingers turned white, or somebody's golden retriever signed his name on their coats in mud. I think that kind of commitment is what I'd like to bring to working with fourth-graders."

Don't Tell Them What You Think They Want to Hear
Most admissions officers read plenty of essays about the charms of their university, the evils of terrorism, and the personal commitment involved in being a doctor. Bring something new to the table, not just what you think they want to hear.

<span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">Don't Write a Resume
<span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">Don't include information that is found elsewhere in the application. Your essay will end up sounding like an autobiography, travelogue, or laundry list. Yawn.
 * <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">"During my junior year, I played first singles on the tennis team, served on the student council, maintained a B+ average, traveled to France, and worked at a cheese factory."

<span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">Don't Use 50 Words When Five Will Do
<span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">Eliminate unnecessary words.
 * <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">**Okay:** "Over the years it has been pointed out to me by my parents, friends, and teachers—and I have even noticed this about myself, as well—that I am not the neatest person in the world."
 * <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">**Better:** "I'm a slob."

<span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">Don't Forget to Proofread
<span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">Typos and spelling or grammatical errors can be interpreted as carelessness or just bad writing. Don't rely on your computer's spell check. It can miss spelling errors like the ones below. <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">This article is based on information found in //The College Application Essay//, by Sarah Myers McGinty, which is available through our online store.
 * <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">"After I graduate //form// high school, I plan to work for a nonprofit organization during the summer."
 * <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">"From that day on, Daniel was my best //fried//."

=<span style="color: #008000; font-family: Georgia,serif;">Recipe for a Draft =

<span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">How to Kick-Start Your College Essay
<span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">Sometimes the hardest part of writing a college admissions essay is just getting started. Here's a quick exercise to get pen to paper (or keyboard to computer). <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">**Step 1: Think about yourself**What are your strengths and weaknesses? What are your best qualities? Are you a plugger? An intellectual? A creative type? Curious? Passionate? Determined? <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">**Step 2: Choose a positive quality you'd like to convey to the admissions committee**Don't pick an event or something you've done. President of the Nuclear Awareness Club is not a personal quality. Focus on a quality of your mind or of your character. Complete this sentence: "I am a very _ person." <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">**Step 3: Tell a story**Set a timer for 20 minutes. Pretend you're taking an exam at high school and responding to, "Tell a story about an experience or time when you showed you were a very _ person." Use the characteristic you identified in Step 2. Write or type non-stop for 20 minutes; force yourself to keep telling the story and what it reveals until the timer goes off.

<span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">You're Done
<span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">Okay. That's it. You've got a rough draft for your college application essay. Look at the college application forms and see what questions they ask. No matter what the questions are, you've already identified the important characteristic you want to convey to each college. <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">This article is based on information found in //The College Application Essay//, by Sarah Myers McGinty, which is available through our online store.

=<span style="color: #008000; font-family: Georgia,serif;">Three Steps to a Great College Essay =

<span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">You, in 500 Words or Less
<span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">The college application essay is a chance to explain yourself, to open your personality, charm, talents, vision, and spirit to the admissions committee. It's a chance to show you can think about things and that you can write clearly about your thoughts. Don't let the chance disappear. Stand up straight and believe in yourself!

<span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">The Essay Writing Process
<span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">Okay, boot up your computer and let's get to it. To write a college essay, use the exact same three-step process you'd use to write an essay for class: first prewrite, then draft, and finally, edit. This process will help you identify a focus for your essay, and gather the details you'll need to support it.

<span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">Prewriting
<span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">To begin, you must first collect and organize potential ideas for your essay's focus. Since all essay questions are attempts to learn about you, begin with yourself.
 * <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">**Brainstorm:** Set a timer for 15 minutes and make a list of your strengths and outstanding characteristics. Focus on strengths of personality, not things you've done. For example, you are responsible (not an "Eagle Scout") or committed (not "played basketball"). If you keep drifting toward events rather than characteristics, make a second list of the things you've done, places you've been, accomplishments you're proud of; use them for the activities section of your application.
 * <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">**Discover Your Strengths:** Do a little research about yourself: ask parents, friends, and teachers what your strengths are.
 * <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">**Create a Self-Outline:** Now, next to each trait, list five or six pieces of evidence from your life—things you've been or done—that prove your point.
 * <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">**Find Patterns and Connections:** Look for patterns in the material you've brainstormed. Group similar ideas and events together. For example, does your passion for numbers show up in your performance in the state math competition and your summer job at the computer store? Was basketball about sports or about friendships? When else have you stuck with the hard work to be with people who matter to you?

<span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">Drafting
<span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">Now it's time to get down to the actual writing. Write your essay in three basic parts: introduction, body, and conclusion. <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">An application essay doesn't need to read like an essay about //The Bluest Eye// or the Congress of Vienna, but thinking in terms of these three traditional parts is a good way to organize your main points. <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">There are three basic essay styles you should consider:
 * <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">The introduction gives your reader an idea of your essay's content. It can shrink when you need to be concise. One vivid sentence might do: "The favorite science project was a complete failure."
 * <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">The body presents the evidence that supports your main idea. Use narration and incident to show rather than tell.
 * <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">The conclusion can be brief as well, a few sentences to nail down the meaning of the events and incidents you've described.
 * <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">**Standard Essay:** Take two or three points from your self-outline, give a paragraph to each, and make sure you provide plenty of evidence. Choose things not apparent from the rest of your application or light up some of the activities and experiences listed there.
 * <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">**Less-Is-More Essay:** In this format, you focus on a single interesting point about yourself. It works well for brief essays of a paragraph or half a page.
 * <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">**Narrative Essay:** A narrative essay tells a short and vivid story. Omit the introduction, write one or two narrative paragraphs that grab and engage the reader's attention, then explain what this little tale reveals about you.

<span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">Editing
<span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">When you have a good draft, it's time to make final improvements to your draft, find and correct any errors, and get someone else to give you feedback. Remember, you are your best editor. No one can speak for you; your own words and ideas are your best bet. <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">This article is based on information found in //The College Application Essay//, by Sarah Myers McGinty, which is available through our online store.
 * <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">**Let It Cool:** Take a break from your work and come back to it in a few days. Does your main idea come across clearly? Do you prove your points with specific details? Is your essay easy to read aloud?
 * <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">**Feedback Time:** Have someone you like and trust (but someone likely to tell you the truth) read your essay. Ask them to tell you what they think you're trying to convey. Did they get it right?
 * <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">**Edit Down:** Your language should be simple, direct, and clear. This is a personal essay, not a term paper. Make every word count (e.g., if you wrote "in society today," consider changing that to "now").
 * <span style="font-family: Georgia,serif;">**Proofread Two More Times:** Careless spelling or grammatical errors, awkward language, or fuzzy logic will make your essay memorable—in a bad way.

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